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employers should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday a year to make employees better at their jobs. to what extend do you agree or disagree?

有观点称企业应该至少给员工4周年假，可以更有利于员工的工作。是否同意？

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02 思路解析

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本题审题时需要注意两个关键词：a 4-week holiday a year和make employees better at their jobs，也就是它实际包含了两个部分：（1）老板是否应该给员工一年4周假期；（2）这样做能否提高其工作效率？我们在写作的时候一定要对这两个部分都进行回应，缺一不可。很多同学可能没有考虑到后面一个部分，没有从“能否提高工作效率”的角度去讨论“是否应该给员工4周假期”，从而造成审题失误。

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同意的观点：

（1）长假能够让员工调整身体，享受家庭团聚；

（2）员工可以利用长假学习新技能；

（3）假期体现了公司对员工的关心，让员工感受到关爱。这样，员工回来后就能更加精力充沛，精神愉悦地工作。

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反对的观点：

（1）员工已经享受了法定假日，每年再给4周长假对公司的运作非常不利；

（2）长假过去后，很多员工变得更懒，工作效率反而下降；

（3）提高员工工作效率的最佳办法不是放假，而是鼓励他们多运动，健康生活，同时提供再培训的机会。

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03 高分范文

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the lengths of annual holidays vary in different companies and different countries. some people think that all employees are entitled to?have at least 4 weeks of holidays every year. i believe that this practice would enhance the satisfaction of employees?and promote the long-term development of the company.

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most employees would welcome the four-week long vocation, which means they would have more time to travel and stay with their family members. it is common for people to suffer from high stress?in their work and taking more time off?is an effective way to relieve this pressure. those busy parents can take this vocation together with their children, which would increase their communication and enhance family cohesion. some employees maytake advantage of the holidays?to attend training courses and improve their professional skills.

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from the perspective of the company, some people may argue that long vocation wouldincrease the labor cost?and affect the normal operation. however, once the employee’s welfare is improved, they are expected to have more motivation to serve the company better. the company may need to hire more people and spend more money on human resources, but it will be rewarded in the long term if employees are happy with how they are treated in the company.

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to summarize, i believe that 4-week holidays would be popular with people in workplaces as this policy can improve the quality of their lives?and motivate them to make more contribution to the company. therefore, it is also beneficial for the company’s long term development.

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04 相关表达

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are entitled to?有权做某事

enhance the satisfaction of employees?提高员工的满意度

suffer from high stress?处在高压状态

taking more time off 有更多的时间休息

relieve this pressure?缓解压力

take advantage of the holidays?利用假期

increase the labor cost 增加人力成本

human resources?人力资源

improve the quality of their lives?提高生活质量

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